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IDProjectCategoryView StatusLast Update
0008616Dwarf FortressTypos/Grammarpublic2014-12-13 08:59
ReporterKetsuban Assigned Touser6 
PrioritynormalSeveritytrivialReproducibilityN/A
Status resolvedResolutionno change required 
Product Version0.40.19 
Summary0008616: Flesh ball description: "it is there that it absorbs"
DescriptionShould this perhaps be "it is thought that it absorbs"? "They are there to absorb" would also work, but to my mind doesn't quite gel with the tone of the other descriptions.

(I came across this while adding a creature variation to work around bug 0007651.)
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user1294

2014-12-12 05:41

  ~0031319

It's not the most common phrasing, but to my knowledge it is grammatically correct - though I'll leave this open for a native speaker to confirm. "It is there (in that debris/near those underground ponds) that it absorbs dead matter for food." is what the sentence is trying to say.

user6

2014-12-13 08:59

  ~0031325

^ Yup, your reading is correct.

Issue History

Date Modified Username Field Change
2014-12-12 04:39 Ketsuban New Issue
2014-12-12 05:41 user1294 Note Added: 0031319
2014-12-13 08:59 user6 Note Added: 0031325
2014-12-13 08:59 user6 Status new => resolved
2014-12-13 08:59 user6 Resolution open => no change required
2014-12-13 08:59 user6 Assigned To => user6