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IDProjectCategoryView StatusLast Update
0000244Dwarf FortressTypos/Grammarpublic2010-06-09 06:47
ReporterKhym Chanur Assigned Touser6 
PrioritynormalSeveritytextReproducibilityhave not tried
Status closedResolutionno change required 
Platformx86 (AMD Athlon 7550 Dual-Core)OSWineOS Version1.1.32
Summary0000244: Bruising combat report grammar issues
DescriptionIn the arena, the combat report will say things like:

"Hydra 1 bites Hydra 2 in the sixth head, bruising the muscle!"

A couple of issues:

1) It should be "bruising his/her/its muscle", unless the message is supposed to be something like "Hydra 1 bites Hydra 2 in the sixth head, bruising the nose!".

2) If using generic "muscle" rather than specific body part like "nose", it should be plural: "bruising her muscles".
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user6

2010-04-03 11:31

  ~0000599

It's "bruising the muscle" like one would say "breaking the skin."

Issue History

Date Modified Username Field Change
2010-04-03 00:25 Khym Chanur New Issue
2010-04-03 11:31 user6 Note Added: 0000599
2010-04-05 09:22 user6 Category General => Typos/Grammar
2010-04-05 13:13 user6 Status new => resolved
2010-04-05 13:13 user6 Resolution open => no change required
2010-04-05 13:13 user6 Assigned To => user6
2010-06-09 06:47 Toady One Status resolved => closed